Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools.
I do not agree with the idea to have boys and girls studying at separate schools. Many reasons force me to avoid this condition, but the most importants are the importance to live together in a normal society, importance of gender respect, and avoid female violence.
Living in a normal society for me means that we have to share our lives with all different kinds of people. This is the start point to respect every human being despite his or her gender, social condition, and race. If we have boys and girls growing up at separate schools, we are allowing them to respect only the same gender. And it can reflect their unusual behavior in the future because they did not have a previous contact with the other gender.
Nowadays, women suffer a huge discrimination in their lives. It is very normal to have a woman doing the same job of a man and with a lower salary. Also, sometimes we realize that a job was given for a man instead of a woman, due to his gender. Additionally, we know that companies avoid to have women as employees because they can get pregnant.
Female violence is getting higher every year. Men need to know that they are not women owners and it is very important to respect women’s needs. If we avoid boys and girls to live together, we are not giving them the opportunity to know and respect each other. Necessities and beliefs will be always different and only living together can avoid future problems.
To conclude, I really believe that boys and girls need to live together. We have to force them to respect each other since they are young people. Giving them the same opportunities, we can help a better development of both and avoid future problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60465116279 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47339013208 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491694352159 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4249382263 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5294117647 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.47058823529 5.45110844103 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111563521119 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469474268518 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833049093808 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743830449049 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045784007483 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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