Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Life has change dramatically since last century. When our grandparents were children, they had a cleaner world, with more freedom specially in the biggest cities. However, during 1900’s life was not easy or more comfortable than it is today for different reasons related to modernity.
First, after the beggining of last century we have realized such important transformations in the world. Even if some elderly still thinks about the importance of their freedom in the past, they have to accept that human beings’ way of life was improved. Absolutely, when eletricity could be used for everyone, we achieved a great difference on our personal life. People could storage food at home for a long time and they had the possibility to have a more comfortable house with air conditioner and heater at home. Additionaly, we are seeing the most modern houses with all appliance being controlled just with a touch on our smartphones.
Second, it is true that people spent more time with each other in the past. Probably, due to some advantage in technology, we are seeing less direct contact between us. On the other hand, during the end of last century, people got the possibility to be in touch with anyone and anywhere, by using some gadgets. Some great technological discoveries, such as internet and smartphones, made our distance from some relatives closer. Nowadays, I can live in USA and everyday is possible to see and talk with my mother. Furthermore, all technological improvment brought a better Medicine with it, so people can be healthier today.
To conclude, we need to respect some old people with a different opinion about modern life. It is normal to hear our grandparents complaining about a tremendous change that they had to accept. Otherwise, I am sure that we have an easier and more comfortable life than the older people had. I will not be surprised if in a few years the modernity will increase to a point never thought before. Maybe, cars will be flying with computers controlling them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, still, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97633136095 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83929348244 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582840236686 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.848606024 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5263157895 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208849665447 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064111114498 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876629157704 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163775493566 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143488826023 0.0645574589148 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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