Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should hire employees for their entire life
Modern technology affects society in many different ways. Some people agree that access to the internet has positive effects to develop their daily lives while others argues about it. In my opinion, the internet gives enormous benefits to both individuals and communities as a whole. I felt this way for two reasons that I will explore in the following subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, rapid advance in technology helps humankind to be able to collect accumulation of knowledge in respective fields. In early ages, people might have lost in their perspectives of a topic, but today, they can check their ideas with others' on the internet. Moreover, varieties of articles and websites are available nowadays, which means students do not have to go the libraries and borrow necessary books for their studies, by clicking search button on Google or other similar platforms will lead to the collection of information with respect to their needs. For instance, during my final year thesis, my professor suggested me to restart a new title and time was very precious at the moment, bothering me a lot. The development in technology was the solution for me; searching information, learning through online, etc. this instance demonstrates that having internet in our daily lives leads to a better vision for future and career.
Secondly, upgraded version of social applications engages people in various locations. When you are studying abroad alone, you can easily have online calls or video chats with your family at anytime and anywhere. this makes us comfortable and feeling relaxed to see whom we miss and like to talk to unlike the previous decades. On the other hand, internet frauds are wandering around online, causing online bullying and internet addiction problems, which are due to wrong usage of internet. Hence, if internet can be used properly, how useful and supportive of online sources is beautifully found.
To wrap up, however, the negativities of the internet is occurring outside the positivities, the advantages of widespread use of internet on our lives always overweigh the disadvantages around the globe.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Modern technology affects society in many different ways. Some people agree that access to ...
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...th your family at anytime and anywhere. this makes us comfortable and feeling relaxe...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22157434402 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77142801938 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650145772595 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7104594662 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.9375 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131150042694 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379196411432 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413663957807 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653997904131 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050330896889 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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