I dis agrees with the statements like business should do anything to make a profit because there are several reasons for that. Every business has it own professional ethics, we should not against it. everyone earning money but that is not important thing, the way how your earning money is more important than how much your earning.
To begin, whatever business you do, I should feel business satisfaction,follow the ethics, should not overlap government policy and most important that business against the law.
Firstly, when i am satisfied with job then feel more better even though if i am earning less, because even if i am earning more but still i don't feel job satisfaction and not spending time for my family then what is use of earning more, it's not going gives any goodness for me. So the business should satisfy me and it should allow me to do some personal things.
Secondly, generally all the business should follow the professional ethics irrespective of political, financial, social and individual influences. If a doctor is not following professional ethics and start simply doing all surgeries even though it is not necessary, then what is use of that doctor. His dignity will get spoil as well as the doctor field also get strain because of a one doctor mistakes. So every business has to follow the professional ethics without
failing to do it.
Thirdly, the business should override the government polices at any cost, every business should follow polices like tariff and taxation. the should manipulate this in order gain more money like smuggling , gambling and illegal races. here you get more money by doing against this polices but once caught, you will be in jail, so what is use of earning more money.
Finally , by doing illegal business like prostitution, smuggling, food adulteration we can more money but will that money help you when your in risk, no it not going help you.
So finally, whatever business we do it should appropriate and satisfy us rather than earning more profit.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
...reasons for that. Every business has it own professional ethics, we should not agai...
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Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...hat is not important thing, the way how your earning money is more important than h...
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Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our earning money is more important than how much your earning. To begin, what...
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Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
... money is more important than how much your earning. To begin, whatever business...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , follow
... do, I should feel business satisfaction,follow the ethics, should not overlap governme...
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Line 6, column 15, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ess against the law. Firstly, when i am satisfied with job then feel more be...
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Line 6, column 49, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Line 6, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...still i don't feel job satisfaction and not spending time for my family then...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ollow polices like tariff and taxation. the should manipulate this in order gain m...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and taxation. the should manipulate this in order gain more money like smuggling ...
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Line 13, column 205, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... in order gain more money like smuggling , gambling and illegal races. here you g...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Here
...smuggling , gambling and illegal races. here you get more money by doing against th...
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Line 13, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gling , gambling and illegal races. here you get more money by doing against this...
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Line 15, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...is use of earning more money. Finally , by doing illegal business like prostitu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nally, whatever business we do it should appropriate and satisfy us rather than e...
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Line 17, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sfy us rather than earning more profit.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'as to', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.196382428941 0.229887763892 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.170542635659 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0749354005168 0.0866891130778 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0878552971576 0.046263068375 190% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0723514211886 0.0685040099705 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0981912144703 0.118717715034 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0516795865633 0.0351676179071 147% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6931903965 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0129198966408 0.0309702414327 42% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0723514211886 0.0887237588012 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0387596899225 0.0209618222197 185% => Try to use less modal verbs (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0258397932817 0.0139019557991 186% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2072.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 342.0 408.028673835 84% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05847953216 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37134502924 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266081871345 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169590643275 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0964912280702 0.112833075102 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6931903965 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485380116959 0.524397521467 93% => OK
Word variations: 49.9607086728 59.2087087015 84% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5736366761 48.84282405 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.133333333 120.699889404 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.06666666667 0.644075263715 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.5376344086 154% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.54480286738 361% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.4081871345 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.046875 1.45489161554 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230889582079 0.300154397459 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134296095363 0.103427244359 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.084752350451 0.0752933317313 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.627111921039 0.497263757937 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.217826061288 0.151897553556 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105248549721 0.114077575197 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813000945408 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.207699015781 0.336927656856 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0600034562852 0.067059652881 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127431252167 0.210909579961 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047184732066 0.0618886996521 76% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30