Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
When it comes to the issue the importance of learning a foreign language, some people believe that in the modern age, they needs to learn at least one foreign language, especially language. However, others have the opposite view and think that learning foreign language difficult. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons
First and the most important reason is that learning new language allows you to learn more. Indeed, you can travel more countries and meet plenty of people from different culture or race. Your exposure to many kinds of people not only improve your people skills, but also give you the firmer knowledge of others, both foe and friend. In addition, you can have many source of knowledge such as articles, magazines, and books in the Internet. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. I am living In Iran, where people speak with Persian. In my country students have access a small percentage of scientific articles in the Internet, because most of them do not know an international language and have to search between Persian articles. While, the scenario surly will be different when they are master on some of International language. The biggest advantage of learning a foreign language lies in the fact that assists us to acquire more knowledge.
A further point we must consider is that you can study abroad, if you can speak and writing with international language. As we all know, if you want to apply for a university in outside of your country, you should learn one of International language, especially English. If you can study abroad, you will have access many facilities like professional teachers. Moreover, you can gain abundant priceless life experience such as being independent and self motive. So, you can gain all of these when you study abroad, which needs to know a foreign language.
Apart from points I made above, the new language lead us to have access more job opportunities. I think that there is not a better example than myself when I graduated from the university as a chemistry engineer. At that time, I could not find a career in my country, because there were not enough factories or businesses. After two years, I decide to try my chance in the one of Western developed county, the United States. For achieve this, I spent much time for learning English, which helps me to gain my aim. Eventually, I succeed to work in an oil factory in California, and this was impossible if I did not learn English.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that learning a foreign language lets us to learn more, study abroad, and find better occupation. Of course, as an English proverb goes “a coin has two sides”; therefore, those who take the opposite view are partly reasonable that learning another language is cumbersome and time consuming. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that its profits outweigh dangerous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...le believe that in the modern age, they needs to learn at least one foreign language,...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun source seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sources'.
Suggestion: many sources
...e and friend. In addition, you can have many source of knowledge such as articles, magazine...
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Line 3, column 759, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ave to search between Persian articles. While, the scenario surly will be different w...
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Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which needs to know a foreign language. Apart from points I made above, the new ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from', 'at least', 'i think', 'in addition', 'of course', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.209059233449 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.146341463415 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0993031358885 0.0866891130778 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0487804878049 0.046263068375 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0783972125436 0.0685040099705 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120209059233 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0174216027875 0.0351676179071 50% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.6989714009 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0226480836237 0.0309702414327 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0853658536585 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0226480836237 0.0209618222197 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.01393728223 0.0139019557991 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2993.0 2387.08602151 125% => OK
No of words: 505.0 408.028673835 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92673267327 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352475247525 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285148514851 0.251872472559 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188118811881 0.174417080927 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120792079208 0.112833075102 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6989714009 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50495049505 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 59.7616389967 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4230769231 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.921575678 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.115384615 120.699889404 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4230769231 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 47.9379284082 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.26751592357 1.45489161554 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274832773148 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0942438275999 0.103427244359 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0586024281526 0.0752933317313 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.458678144105 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136612621889 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902595283947 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530559339246 0.0781384742642 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.269747112714 0.336927656856 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.112311954948 0.067059652881 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180428276079 0.210909579961 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631589725684 0.0618886996521 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.