Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position
Learning a foreign language is an important skill in our world today. In order to proceed in your education, you have to learn another language. Some people believe that children should begin learning a foreign language early in school. Others would disagree. In my view, learning a foreign language as soon as children start school is very important for two important reasons.
The main reason is that learning a language in the early school is much easier than learning it in a late adult age. In other words, children in early school years are more capable of learning and memorizing than later in a high school or a university. For example, when I was in elementary school in my hometown Tripoli, we were studying only Arab language. The foreign language was not allowed until the high school, we started learning English language at second year of high school. Then when I graduated from high school and entered a university, I attended Medical school of Tripoli University. The lectures were almost in English language, so I had a very difficult time as I had to translate the lectures to Arabic, and enrolled in English courses to improve my English language. This was time consuming because I started learning English in an older age and it was difficult to understand the language easily. As you can see this would not occur if English language learning started early as children start school.
Another good reason for learning a foreign language early in school is that it will helps in the future career. English language is a worldwide language that needed in nearly most of the job markets today, as it's a language of technology, medical field and so on. For instance, when I was graduated from medical school, I wanted to complete my postgraduate study. The medical institution that I want to applied for require applicants to pass an English proficiency exam in order to be accepted. Therefore, I decided to enter the exam and after I pass the language test, I was able to apply for the medical university to finish my postgraduate degree. This experience taught me that, a foreign language is an important and should be started as early as possible.
In summary, though some may oppose my opinion, a foreign language must be learned early in a school. Not only because it easy to master, but also it will helps with future career. All elementary schools should start learning a foreign language as children begin school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...anguage early in school is that it will helps in the future career. English language ...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...early most of the job markets today, as its a language of technology, medical field...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...use it easy to master, but also it will helps with future career. All elementary scho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in summary, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87290167866 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.649334232 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429256594724 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1093854512 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3636363636 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9545454545 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295204235955 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11457147315 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956912070219 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227761858781 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700376647728 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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