Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
learning a foreign language is a very important part of our society today. people throughout the world communicate with each other, and so it is neccessary to learn another language. Some people believe that children when begin school should be acquiring a knowledge of foreign language. others hold the opposite view. In my opinion, learning another language early in school is more advantaeous for two noticeable reasons.
First, learning another language, especially with strating school, will help to children to progress in future career. As over time, with arrival advanced technology, all nations will associate with each other. In other words, english language is internationl language, and learning it is necessary to get job, so children have to absorb english languages early. For example, when I graduated with a master in mechanical engineering, I wanted to apply for PHD in Canada, english language certificate was obligatory. Fortunately, I involved with english language a lot, because students are compelled to get english courses in my elementary school, and , by and by, I could passed an english proficiency exam in order to were accepted by committee of university. Obviously, I obtained admirable situation among 2000 of applicants. This experience taught me that, learning foreign laguage have positive role in fate of children and should be started as early as possible.
Second is learning foreign language in the early school is easier and faster than in late adult age. Unfortunately, forgetting is the worst events for everyone’s life, especially adult age. However, in childhood children are more capable to learn new and various things such as english language. For instance, statitics showed that children had fresh and susceptible memory to absorb extreme information than middle-aged person. they investigated two group individuals, children in elementary school and adult person in company, for one year in order to determine which group learn faster and easier. At first, investigators expected adult person progressed quickly and got higher score on different exams throughout the year than children in school. Surprisingly, in spite of expected, results showed children passed all english coures early and got excellent scores because students not just had good memory, but also they were motivation to learn Enligh language. As you can see english language learning started early as children start school is easy.
In conclusion, schooling foreign language have numerous advantageous for children, early in school. learning freign language not only is easy to skilled, but also it will help to make good progress with their future career. All society should provide all equipment for students to learn foreign language right away they start school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2365.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47453703704 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83851287704 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523148148148 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7214794839 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.826086957 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7826086957 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91304347826 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2725560562 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920806903967 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640377439437 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197390944053 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304370457688 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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