Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
education is a crucial part of our lifes. As over time, the different ways have been tried to find the best approch in order to improve the level of education that influence on developing society directly. In this regard, some people believe that, in the past, parents helped their children's schooling, while others hold the opposite view and claim that these days parents are more involved in education of their children. In my view, these days children are guided in their education by their parents for two noticeable reasons.
first, today's family is consisted of fewer children than the past and so parents have a lot of time to assist in their children's education. Whereas, in the past, the majority of family had many children that parents had to allocate all the their time to work in order to provide their families or remain economically stable, now most of family are small that consist of one or two children. Therefore, parents really have time for directing the way of their children toward better education. For example, now I have one child, who is very successful in school. I and my wife divide our daily time for helping our child because we can afford our expenses with little work for short period of day. On the other hand, unfortunately, when I, living in huge family included of 10 children, was in elementary school, I got fire from school due to the fact anybody in my family did not have time. my father had to work all the years and my mother was not literacy to help me. this experience taught me that nowadays parents have more time to deal with the education of their children.
Second, now the content of books are more complicated than the past and children need to be helped by parents. In the past, books in school were very unsophisticated and were understandable, while by progress of the educations the content of books become so difficult. In fact, children really need difficult subjects, which teacher can not instruct exactly, to be supported by their parents so as to solve hard issue if they want to progress quickly. For instance, when my sister was in intermediate school, she had a lot of problems with mathematic courses. By changing mathematic’s course her teacher could not teach all contents. Sadly, she faced severe problem in mathematic and got hated from this course. Fortunately, my father, was educated from university in mathematic major, could help her during the semester. At first, he tried to teach her how learn to solve math question. Luckly, in the end of semaster, she got high score on mathematic exam because of her father. if her father did not had involved with her education, now she would not have be successful person.
In conclusion, parents involve with their children's education and support them. Not only do they have sufficient time, but also they know complicated books. we should deal with our children' education if the success of their children is really important for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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education is a crucial part of our lifes. As over...
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...anybody in my family did not have time. my father had to work all the years and my...
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...actly, to be supported by their parents so as to solve hard issue if they want to progre...
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..., but also they know complicated books. we should deal with our children education...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2476.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 508.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87401574803 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62509798051 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478346456693 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 758.7 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9692065176 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.04 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.32 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.24 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266784390822 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878052280797 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939197659482 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194112082096 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486803449398 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.