From the beginning, parents always try to guide their kids to the right way, however, when children go to school, they interact with other people, like classmates and teachers, this new group could have more impact to children than parents and consequently, this behavior jumps as a result of instinct needings, where children need to grow up rapidly. Depending on every family, each individual usually acts distinctively than others.
First of all, we have a group of students who share their new experiences with others in the same age, what happens with their parents? They often loose influence or interest in the family decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 15.1003584229 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 52.1666666667 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 539.0 1977.66487455 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 104.0 407.700716846 26% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18269230769 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.19343686757 4.48103885553 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60147247221 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 212.727598566 37% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.759615384615 0.524837075471 145% => OK
syllable_count: 156.6 618.680645161 25% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.650283471 48.9658058833 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 134.75 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.45110844103 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12887350824 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626580625739 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289475242287 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963304884247 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157409763684 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 86.8835125448 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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