Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
some people agree with this statement, "governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams." however, I disagree with the statement. this opinion is supported by the following reasons.
First of all, the governments may get more medals at an Olympic. if those athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams win a medal, they can earn a reputation. The governments also may be highly regarded as a strong sports country, so I consider they should spend a lot of money to support athletics.
Second, the citizen can be more healthy. if some state-sponsored Olympic teams are active in the world, the public will come to take an interest in playing sports such as soccer, tennis, and rugby.
In my personal experience, I was not interested in playing sports when I was a child. At that time, Kei Nishikori who is a Japanese tennis player won a medal at an Olympic and many people have interested in playing tennis. I was also keen on it. As a result, those exercises made me more healthy. I consider this is not possible for keening on art.
Certainly, There are some advantages to art. For instance, the citizen can improve their imagination and expression. if the governments spend more money in support of the arts, plenty of people come to take an interested in art. Consequently, the public can refine their art sense. Furthermore, a new style of art may be created because of it. however, I feel the advantage of supporting sports overcomes that of supporting art.
In conclusion, for the reasons I mention above, I disagree with the statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 277.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95306859206 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03473786452 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501805054152 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2806203821 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2105263158 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5789473684 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42105263158 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400071693777 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108736238182 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134380940847 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213964333825 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175485775875 0.0645574589148 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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