Over the last few decades, the lifestyle of individuals has transformed alongside the increase in human activities on the earth. These changes and their effects have become a very controversial topic of discussion. I am of the opinion that nowadays the cons of human activities overweight their pros. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First, many human activities affect negatively the ecosystem. Overpopulation, burning fossil fuels and deforestation, these human acts have a great impact on the physical environment. For example, in my city during the last decade, hundreds of buildings and houses have been built at the cost of forests and trees in the city. The number of trees has decreased enormously and has caused many dilemmas, such as deforestation and soil erosion. This example clearly illustrates how the activities of humans can affect the surrounding ecosystem.
Second, human activities trigger climate change, global warming, poor air quality, and undrinkable water. The previous results would harm people's health physically and mentally. The world health Organization showed the effects of these acts on the body's health are permanent and might cause death sometimes. For instance, during cutting trees in my city, air pollutants percent has climbed from 10% to 50%. This increase has caused harm to the people's health in my city. The number of sick citizens has increased and people who have asthma and other respiratory problems. This example illustrates how much these activities would cause serious health problems.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the effects of human acts are dangerous and make the earth the worst place to live. This is because the health problems might result and the damage of the ecosystem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...%. This increase has caused harm to the peoples health in my city. The number of sick c...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30877192982 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79205221218 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2416186938 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0555555556 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128715316957 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433187370205 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053833133797 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921117992812 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364770909984 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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