Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of knowing and viewing the world news. Today, individuals should take into consideration the constructive and destructive facets of this issue. However, if I were forced to choose, I would definitely prefer to peruse the events happening around the globe. It is my firm belief that the knowledge of the world news is an essential element for several reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, keeping up with the news will improve your personality. To be specific, the knowledge of events happening around the world will give you more topics to talk about, which will enhance the communication skills of a person. Furthermore, people who browse news on the internet or newspaper can easily form their opinions about the events and cases. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my experience. When I was a child, I was a shy person and I usually could not find interesting topics to talk about with others. Fortunately, during my time at secondary school, I have started reading news from many websites on the internet, for example, CNN, BBC, and Washington post websites. As a result, this habit has improved my communication skills and give me the chance to form my opinion about many events in the world and in the middle east specifically. For this reason, the knowledge of news and events has positive impacts on personality.
Secondly, the educational values that we can get from the news. In a narrow condition, knowing news keeps people updated and provides important educational values. Additionally, it helps to open people's minds to new things and other views. To be specific, a person who has a myriad of political and cultural knowledge, can simply and noticeably accept other people's views and cultures. Drawing from my own experience, before I entered university, I read a lot about the culture and events in Yemen. Therefore, I easily made many friendships with Yemenis during my time at university. It's certainly clear to see why knowing events happen around the world is an essential component in our educational values.
In the light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that perusal events and news happening around the world would enrich our education likewise build our personalities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5325.0 1977.66487455 269% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 11.1635220126 4.8611393121 230% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.5371569427 2.67179642975 507% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524109014675 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 1469.7 618.680645161 238% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.1 1.51630824373 204% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 232.644270081 48.9658058833 475% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 313.235294118 100.406767564 312% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 28.0588235294 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0187209737006 0.236089414692 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401486036681 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533119388862 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0181141325941 0.150856017488 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00837392844018 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.2 11.7677419355 384% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -83.84 58.1214874552 -144% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.9 10.1575268817 314% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 47.74 10.9000537634 438% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 86.8835125448 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 10.002688172 165% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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