Nowadays, with advancing technology and developing types of equipment, adding violence to movies is easier, leading children and teenagers to become aggressive. Enhancing and Sociologists and experts' concern about violence in films has increased. They warn about the destructive effects of these films on children's minds. I entirely agree with this statement, and there are reasons why I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, film production companies try to attract spectators with every violence they can, including physical, verbal, or sexual violence, to reap its benefits. There is nothing worse than gaining money by exploiting people's minds. They use stereotyped subjects and decorate them with different violence without any creativity. These movies are full of hate, disobedience, and ruination and stark contrast to ethical issues. For instance, I saw one of the best-selling movies that got an important prized at the Kan festival, it has produced by a Collection of different violence, and its topic was about the man who messed up one city.
The second thing worth bearing in mind is that research has shown that 91 percent of movies on television contain different kinds of violence. Looking at the list of names of different movies shows a scary reality. The Killers, The Naked and The Dead, The Plot to Murder Hitler, Strip, and so on. If you want to see movies with family, you fall into a big confusion, since these do not deserve to watch. These movies introduce violence as a natural consequence of dissatisfaction and defeats. As a result, the juvenile can justify their aggression.
The last but not the least point that verifies the claim mentioned in the first is that violence surrounds us, and every day we hear and see different kinds of violence. The high violence rate, similar to violence in movies, elucidates that youth are under the influence of violent movies. In contrast, the actual consequences of violence do not show in the film, so they do not fully grasp the damaging results. For example, the last case of a lethal attack happened in the texas state where 19 children were killed by one of their classmates, and finally, the attacker died by police.
In a nutshell, I strongly think that violence is an inseparable part of films. Thus, one of the essential ways to control violence in society is surveillance of movie content.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75589822018 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5925 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0767215361 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8095238095 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0476190476 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 19.0 3.85842293907 492% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208113912388 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055549777947 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477748832747 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113766169198 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306959160464 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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