Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Finding the most satisfying job is one of the hardest things. Some jobs may pay you well but at the same time they could be extremely stressful. Other jobs might be more relaxed but the compensation is very little compared to the effort exerted on the job. We also cannot forget the workplace environment and how you are able to get along with other coworkers. This last factor is one of the most important to consider in a job. Thus, I agree with the statement that people should accept an offer for a secure job right away instead of waiting for the most fulfilling position. I feel this way for many reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, landing on the most rewarding job only comes through trial and error. So many factors could affect the quality of a job, such as coworkers, managers, pay, the actual tasks required for the job and even the time-off policies. For instance, reading about companies' policies is not enough to get a comprehensive idea about the actual policies or how they are implemented. For example, the rules of taking vacation or time off work could be more flexible than it's declared in the firm employee book. As a result, being a team member is the only way to discover the real values of an organization.
Secondly, waiting for the best job offer could be a waste of time. Getting into the field and gaining more experience that could be added to one's resume is the right thing to do. Moreover, any employment gaps could be a subject of questions on future interviews. Seizing opportunities, on the other hand, makes job candidates more competitive. Furthermore, people learn various skills from different jobs. My own experience is a compelling example on that. When I moved to California, I was hesitant at first to accept jobs that was not related to my career. Nevertheless, once I started working on some of these jobs, I came to realize that I honestly could gain valuable experience from these simple part-time jobs. Consequently, people should try to work as many jobs as they can since this will hone their skills and abilities.
To sum up, I am of the opinion that an opportunity sometimes does not come twice and individuals should accept a secure job and should not wait for better packages. This is mainly due to the fact that experimentation is the only technique to capture the most suitable position that matches your capabilities and qualifications. What's more, staying out of the workforce could have a negative impact on your resume.
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... have a negative impact on your resume.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, honestly, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78082191781 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71800464657 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559360730594 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7224861101 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360251473322 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905330374296 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668434590353 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211740461637 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607201609008 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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