When it comes to financial issues there are always going to be terrifying dilemmas and choosing the right option might be the most important decision in life. If you want to make money you got to get a good job, but there are always different career options and some of them might have better conditions than your current one. Some people do not take the courage to risk it all and prefer to stick to their way of making money. In my opinion, looking for better options is a better idea and I have some reasons to explain my point of view precisely.
To begin with, there is always a notable chance of finding a better opportunity for our financial problems and if we do not choose it we will going to regret it for the rest of our lives. Being greedy and ambitious is an excellent mentality that causes progress and finally makes us rich. There is always something that suits us better and has better compatibility with our characteristics. The price of this lifetime of happiness is being brave and gambling what we have already, but in the end, the perfect problem-solving career is waiting for us to earn it.
Furthermore, risking might cause us short-term pains, but after enduring the hard days we will be more powerful, and as they say: “What does not kill you makes you stronger”. By going through a difficult mind-blowing road to our ideal career goal, there is going to be a significant improvement in our skills. At first, it seems to be impossible to pass overcome this hardship, but the person who deserves the satisfying lifestyle, who is the real die-hard eventually, can survive all of the difficulties of this dreadful road.
To wrap it up, I extremely believe that searching for a better job situation can be a life-changing decision that leads to an excellent life. Not only is this risk going to enhance our personality, but also it never going to make you regret not going behind your safe zone. We should not be hasty when it comes to making big decisions like this. Focusing and searching can help us be thoughtful and consider the evidence and in the end, the best job is waiting for us which leads us to happiness and pleasure in most aspects of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...lems and if we do not choose it we will going to regret it for the rest of our lives....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng career is waiting for us to earn it. Furthermore, risking might cause us shor...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e real die-hard eventually, can survive all of the difficulties of this dreadful road. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the difficulties of this dreadful road. To wrap it up, I extremely believe that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, so, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65769694608 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.5309161712 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.6 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193295837929 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645100062191 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348575557749 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116388671699 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331427820033 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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