Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is critically important that everyone take part in creating a better society. In my opinion, nowadays, younger members of our community have much more effect on the future we make than ever. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, young people take their responsibilities more seriously than older generations. Notwithstanding, the fact that they do not have much experience, they are serious and want to work more and more to get what they deserve, and they won’t stop until they reach their social goal. For instance, my younger brother and his friends have started running their own business since they were just teenagers. They work together as a team, by accomplishing their tasks and helping themselves, and now they are examples of successful entrepreneurs.
Furthermore, youngers’ social awareness is at its peak, and it continues to increase, even more, day-by-day. Technology and the modern educational system came up together to enhance their level of understanding and information of them. As a result, they are skillful enough to make better decisions leading us to a brighter future. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Although my grandfather is more experienced than I am, he does not know anything about some aspects of modern life. As a result, I always make better decisions than him on some social issues. Consequently, he saw me making good decisions, and he learned to trust me.
To wrap it up, I extremely believe that younger people play more roles in the future of their world than at any other time. Not only are they more responsible, but also they have much more knowledge. As a result, everyone should rely on them, and let them lead us to a better, and more suitable life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, for instance, i feel, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96013289037 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91329356397 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598006644518 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5249118826 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8235294118 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0712238780294 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250693463907 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240964834063 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474116088105 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197642407059 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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