Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on the salaries of university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Education is becoming more important every day. Schools always want their students to do well and are looking for ways to help them. The best way to assist them in achieving their academic goals is to pay professors higher salaries. Although better facilities and access to the latest technology are important, so are teacher salaries. I agree with the statement because in this way the university will attract the best candidates and the professors will feel respected.
People who have advanced degrees have many options when choosing employment. If private companies are offering much more money to these graduates, it will be hard for universities to attract top students. A friend of mine recently graduated from Harvard and took a job at Price-Waterhouse. He had considered working for a college, but decided to take the better paycheck. If, however, professors were paid higher salaries, more highly qualified graduates, like my friend, would choose to work in academia. This would ensure that students had access to the smartest and most talented professors possible.
In my country, education is not the most highly regarded field of employment. This is mainly due to the fact that teachers and professors don’t earn as much as doctors, lawyers or business people. Because money is so important in our society, it is often equated with success. If professors were more highly remunerated, they would receive more respect not only from students, but also from the society as a whole. Even if they don’t get more respect, at least they can have better living conditions. This alone will make them better educators.
Higher salaries for professors is the best way for schools to improve the quality of their services. Having the best teachers possible will allow the university and the students to develop in the best way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71290483395 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1185507881 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.8 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16376331252 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450746102597 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449603035102 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102710373914 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221812908276 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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