Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better for people to choose jobs that provide high salaries even though they do not enjoy doing them than it is for people to choose jobs that they enjoy but which provide low salaries

Essay topics:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for people to choose jobs that provide high salaries even though they do not enjoy doing them than it is for people to choose jobs that they enjoy but which provide low salaries.

Submitted by Olesya23 on Wed, 10/13/2021 - 13:54

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Average: 7 (2 votes)
Essay Categories
Independent TOEFL Writing

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
In the todays society, the job has a vital role. The ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... to choose a lot of types of workplaces.In my opinion, it is better to has a job w...
^^
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...te of none enjoyable process of working.The precise explanation is developed in the...
^^^
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... do things he or she really wants to do.For example, if I work as a boss and do not...
^^^
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...st do my favorite deals after main work.Also the high salary open me more opportinit...
^^^^
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...st do my favorite deals after main work.Also the high salary open me more opportinit...
^^^^
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...rious details in the job process and it help to fall in love in the things which rep...
^^^^
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...n the things which repellent the person.For instance, on my previous workplace I di...
^^^
Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...y for me. The reason I feel this way is because my mother did not love her work and she...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
... it for welfare of our family. Once she said me that her life is not bad, because sh...
^^^^
Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
... I remembered how she was glad when she give my brother and me a possibility to grow...
^^^^
Line 7, column 393, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Based
...he had this experience in her childhood.Based on this experience, I believe that the ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... take care of a family. In conclusion,it is for all aforementioned reasons,I fir...
^^^
Line 9, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ion,it is for all aforementioned reasons,I firmly believe that if the person do no...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40752351097 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65536671224 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.050882456 48.9658058833 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.75 100.406767564 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.875 20.6045352989 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.625 5.45110844103 268% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228682634683 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989249349658 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728079704661 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134702290328 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684852802973 0.0645574589148 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 11.7677419355 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.89 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
In the todays society, the job has a vital role. The ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... to choose a lot of types of workplaces.In my opinion, it is better to has a job w...
^^
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...te of none enjoyable process of working.The precise explanation is developed in the...
^^^
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... do things he or she really wants to do.For example, if I work as a boss and do not...
^^^
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...st do my favorite deals after main work.Also the high salary open me more opportinit...
^^^^
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...st do my favorite deals after main work.Also the high salary open me more opportinit...
^^^^
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...rious details in the job process and it help to fall in love in the things which rep...
^^^^
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...n the things which repellent the person.For instance, on my previous workplace I di...
^^^
Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...y for me. The reason I feel this way is because my mother did not love her work and she...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
... it for welfare of our family. Once she said me that her life is not bad, because sh...
^^^^
Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
... I remembered how she was glad when she give my brother and me a possibility to grow...
^^^^
Line 7, column 393, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Based
...he had this experience in her childhood.Based on this experience, I believe that the ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... take care of a family. In conclusion,it is for all aforementioned reasons,I fir...
^^^
Line 9, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ion,it is for all aforementioned reasons,I firmly believe that if the person do no...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40752351097 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65536671224 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.050882456 48.9658058833 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.75 100.406767564 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.875 20.6045352989 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.625 5.45110844103 268% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228682634683 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989249349658 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728079704661 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134702290328 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684852802973 0.0645574589148 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 11.7677419355 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.89 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.