It is better for people to choose jobs that provide high salaries even though they do not enjoy doing them than it is for people to choose jobs that they enjoy but which provide low salaries.
Having a stable and solid financial status is very important in lives of people because this will prevent them from getting involved in evil acts like robbery, corruption etc. I strongly recommend a job that a person enjoys even if the pay is not very huge due to the following reasons.
Firstly, a popular saying goes this "to succeed in whatever you do, you must enjoy it". Choosing a job that one enjoys invariably counts as being successful in such jobs. For instance, l am a teacher who earns less than 21,000 naira. Considering the present condition of Nigeria's economy, this kind of salary is not enough for the basic needs of a man not to talk of someone that has wives and children. However, since l enjoy teaching people since my early days at college, l continued to strive towards my career as a teacher and today l was able to succeed in my field as a professional teacher.
Second, there should be a better rationale behind people's choice of job than monetary reasons. For example, personal fulfillment, recognition etc. This is the major reason why football players prefer to explore highly reputable clubs that pays meagre salaries to less known clubs that pay high salaries. This is because the popular clubs give the player the opportunity of being recognized throughout the globe especially if such players have the opportunity of having much playing time.
Finally, there is probability that a person that chooses to work in companies that pays high salaries but with little wages runs the risk of dropping the work due to boredom particularly in companies that do not encourage innovation. The reason for this is because getting involved in what one does not enjoy coupled with platitudeness of repeating the same thing everyday on the job quickly wears out the worker and would later realize that he or she no longer possess the zeal to continue with the work.
Though some people may argue that even the high salary attached to the job can create happiness or would relieve boredom but it is clear that this idea is totally wrong because money alone can never bring happiness, it must be coupled with other factors like life worth, self actualization etc. Hence it is better for an individual to choose the job he loves even if it pays less
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 254, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...courage innovation. The reason for this is because getting involved in what one does not e...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he job he loves even if it pays less
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8320610687 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52735424997 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569974554707 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2035214696 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.6 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302147297443 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965199529965 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521228333988 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15659960756 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410526334077 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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