Jobs are considered crucial in all periods for their benefits, mainly providing a salary or wage. As technology advances and the population grows, a contentious issue is whether to hire someone for a job that is not enjoyable but pays well or one that is enjoyable but pays poorly. No one can deny that each option has its advantages and disadvantages, but if I had to choose, it would be better to have a job with higher earnings. It is my firm belief for three main reasons, which I will develop in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, a high salary means stability and a wide range of benefits. I have to admit that my father's experience is a compelling illustration of my statement. My dad worked at a clothing import business, making a decent amount to support five people. He admits he did not enjoy the job, but it provides many benefits, such as free business class on all transportation and guaranteed accommodations. Whenever he traveled to other countries to negotiate the prices and show samples, he would get a first-class ticket at no charge. With this, he would be able to learn new languages and cultures every time he goes on business trips, plus it also applies to us. The guarantee provided by his company allows us to save a tremendous amount of money when we visit our home country, South Korea.
One group of sociologists shows how low-income people face numerous risks, competition, and economic difficulties. My aunt, who worked in a hair salon, confirmed the study. She worked in a hair salon for twenty years, and during those times, she earned a minimal wage but was satisfied since she was doing her passion and had a lot of free time to spend with her family and friends. Despite that, she regretted it because she had to close her business at mid-thirty and retire when the number of customers decreased during the pandemic. It caused her to rely on her husband's salary, which was not a wise decision.
To wrap up, the government authorities in developing countries find it challenging to provide sustenance for their people. With inflation going higher, people have significant liabilities. Hence, a well-paid job will oversee the essential requirements of a family. For instance, my current job with Yahoo as a project manager doesn't make me excited to go to the office every day. However, the paycheck at the end of the month covers my home loan and personal loans.
To sum up, based on the reasons I mentioned, individuals should choose a job with a high salary even if it is boring and undesirable than a job with a low income.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, well, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75946547884 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81886541927 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590200445434 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8044472189 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1363636364 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4090909091 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241459196261 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591991218724 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741323944687 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1520023918 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101908686114 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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