Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to work as a member of a team than as an individual in order to succeed.
Some people think that working as a member of a team we are able to produce more and the job becomes more productive. However, others state otherwise. They believe that working individually is better because we can grow at a faster pace than if we had been as a member of a team. In my opinion, working as a member of a team overdoes the individual one. I believe this as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, when we are a member of a team, we are likely to make mistakes in the work environment and this can be rectified by our colleagues. For example, as in any company there is nobody perfect or perfecting a work without errors. We are always about to make mistakes at any time and as somebody is always watching out us, then we can perform the tasks easily without fretting. Therefore, this example elucidates that it is safe to say that in a team, the chances to make errors are less than working individually.
Furthermore, if one intents to grow in a company, the best way to do it is through helping others because as mentioned earlier, there is always somebody watching us. We may grow rapidly or slowly depending the way we perform the task and , also, how easygoing we assist others. For instance, if one employee is making efforts towards others in assisting them, bosses will pay attention on this occasions and they might promote employees. Thus, this instance illustrates that being a member of a team overpasses the being individually because we can grow faster.
Moreover, working individually is not a good option because if we make mistakes, there will not be anybody around us ready to assist. As another example of this is the case when one employee tries to pull everyone legs by trying to execute the entire job. This way he can undermine himself and maybe , he can be expelled from the company. This last example clarifies that being individually is not the best option.
Finally, I strongly agree that being a member of a team overpasses being only an individual because inside the company we can grow fast enough than being otherwise and we may not make mistakes because we are being watched while executing tasks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one intent', 'an intent', or simply 'intents'?
Suggestion: one intent; an intent; intents
... working individually. Furthermore, if one intents to grow in a company, the best way to d...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'watches'.
Suggestion: watches
...ioned earlier, there is always somebody watching us. We may grow rapidly or slowly depen...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...epending the way we perform the task and , also, how easygoing we assist others. F...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ting them, bosses will pay attention on this occasions and they might promote employ...
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Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'overpass'?
Suggestion: overpass
...lustrates that being a member of a team overpasses the being individually because we can g...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t be anybody around us ready to assist. As another example of this is the case whe...
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Line 4, column 299, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s way he can undermine himself and maybe , he can be expelled from the company. Th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62924281984 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61241118336 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488250652742 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0179897276 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38888888889 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160661328702 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631702727626 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682951864672 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107783326383 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636668279302 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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