Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Stating that native regions people are more likely to reach goals is relative. Native regions can influence people in some situations, however they cannot exert influences in other occasions. It is only a matter of taking a perspective and weighing what should be consider as true and what should not.
First of all, successful people may not appear from originated areas. Most cases, they have to move out to other cities for making a living. For instance, one of my teacher had to move to southern São Paulo for having the nuclear physics certificate at university of São Paulo due to the fact that there were no physics courses in his city. Nowadays, he is a milionary person and never more did he return to his hometown.
Moreover, success comes from becoming renown where someone lives. If a person is recognized by his works, he/she will tend to be famous and well known, living in his origin village or not.
However, only people who are already born in a highly wealth family will be able to get at objectives. For these situations, it is valid to say that the region affects the person because he/she will have to maintain the family wealth.
Finally, not always are accomplished people influenced by their original area because many factors are involved in the manner and they need to be evaluated separately.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...perspective and weighing what should be consider as true and what should not. First of...
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Line 4, column 46, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('highly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('wealth') instead of another adjective.
...er, only people who are already born in a highly wealth family will be able to get at objective...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
...ntain the family wealth. Finally, not always are accomplished people influenced by their...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... many factors are involved in the manner and they need to be evaluated separately...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81578947368 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49827579816 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4495570639 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246971911529 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863940947086 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819322109975 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126674105897 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901762569545 0.0609392437508 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.