What is the most important job for having a creating the future of a nation? I think teachers are an essential part of the education system and they are playing the toughest role in having a better country. Some of them are kind some of them are not, but their main goal is to make our children better people in any aspect of life. in my opinion, an excellent teacher can be both popular and effective, and I have reasons to support my point of view.
To begin with, when you are trying to understand someone’s feelings, caring for their problems, and having sympathy people are going to love you, and It does not relate to being good at your job. As a matter of fact, this happens for all careers, especially for hard-working teachers. They can try to improve their communication skills and be kind to their students, so they can trust them. This kind of intimate relationship leads teachers to be loved by their students.
Furthermore, helping others overcome their real educational or individual issues, can cause both of you to bond together in a good way. A teacher has to pay attention not only to students’ school lessons but also to their real-life concerns. By helping and understanding students, who have their hardships both at home and classroom, they are starting to rely on you differently. In this case, it seems you are their compassionate friend who can also teach them practical lessons. In the end, you can be a perfect teacher by enhancing their knowledge level at school, and at the same time, you’re a devoting friend too. This means being a beloved teacher does not limit you to work effectively anymore.
To wrap it up, I extremely believe that being an efficient teacher does not mean you can be a liked one too. Having a good relationship with students not only makes you their favorite one, but also it leads them to try harder for making progress in their life. In conclusion, every teacher must try to find a good way of socializing with their class members, so we can have excel in the educational system.
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...en better people in any aspect of life. in my opinion, an excellent teacher can be...
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...teachers to be loved by their students. Furthermore, helping others overcome the...
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...ith their class members, so we can have excel in the educational system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, as to, i think, in conclusion, kind of, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6648199446 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65271581406 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529085872576 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1495694794 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0588235294 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220637570029 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804115520189 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448589630427 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14293913489 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417174422122 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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