Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree that it is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. The reasons are as follows.
First of all, people should have broad horizons, and knowing about events occurring around the world can broaden their horizons. For example, I read a lot of news from TV channels of different countries, such as CNN, BBC, DW, etc., and those news may sometimes have different opinions on the same things. Therefore, by doing so, I can understand different aspects from different countries on the exact same things. Also, that makes me think out of the box and learn how to realize international affairs.
Secondly, people should always learn new things, and knowing about events happening outside their own countries helps them learn new knowledge. For example, I have learned a lot of cultures and lifestyles of different countries or regions by watching TV channels that introduce these. By doing so, if one day I have a chance to travel to a certain country, I will then be more accustomed to their cultures and also will not offend local people easily.
Last but not least, people should prepare for confronting things out of control, and being aware of events happening around the world allows them to do so. For example, the Ukraine-Russia war is happening right now, and that makes people care about how to defend my own country against external threats. Furthermore, people all over the world start to find ways to maintain peace among countries that have significant conflicts.
Therefore, I totally believe that it is vital for people to be aware of events happening around the world, even if those events may not affect their daily lives. Knowing about events happening in different countries does help people to broaden their horizons, learn new things, and even know how to prepare for unpredictable events.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
...ntries, such as CNN, BBC, DW, etc., and those news may sometimes have different opinions o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97798742138 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55587649306 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503144654088 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6043446252 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.071428571 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241688393396 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107067011017 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160004856973 0.0737576698707 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215191028615 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.217689100801 0.0645574589148 337% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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