Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree that the rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict for the following reasons.
First, young people are creative, and the rules that societies today expect them to follow are too strict for them to perform their creativity. For example, some citizens think that graffiti makes the city look mess, so some governments prohibit their people from graffitiing on the wall. However, a lot of young people who love to express their amazing ideas by painting on walls, and if graffiti is not allowed, those talented young people will lose a platform to show their creativity.
Second, young people nowadays have their personal perspectives, just like adults. Some rules that societies expect them to follow are too strict, such as limiting them from voting. For example, many countries do not allow their citizens who are below 20 years old to vote. Nevertheless, in my opinion, eighteen-year-old young people are mature enough to make their own choices. I believe that they have ability to express their perspectives after they graduate from high school because what they have learned before graduation, such as civilization, public society, are sufficient for them to take responsibility on their own choices.
Finally, people nowadays need to make their knowledge up to date frequently. Some parents limit their children from using phones or computers all the time. If so, I think that it may make their children obsolete because they cannot access the Internet at any time they want to search things or receive news. For example, some parents in Taiwan set a time limit for their kids to use the phones or computers because they think those electronic devices may cause eye problems. However, without unlimited usage of phones and computers, they may have to keep their confusion in mind and wait for the time that is allowed to use those searching tools, but sometimes they may forget what they have problems on and that makes them lose an opportunity to obtain knowledges, which may be precious for their lives.
Due to the reasons mentioned above, I agree that the rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, so, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02459016393 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52899368754 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497267759563 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4538449533 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.6 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229446281186 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126994911814 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174692282477 0.0737576698707 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273760352477 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.209117792149 0.0645574589148 324% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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