Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree that it is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation for the following reasons.
First, people nowadays rely on the Internet a lot for entertainment. If the governments spend money to improve Internet access, people will be able to use the Internet not being limited by their locations. For example, I love to watch TV shows and movies on Netflix, and when I go camping in the mountains, I also want to watch them before I sleep. If there is the Internet with decent speed, I can kill time with my favorite TV shows in my camp site.
Second, people sometimes need to access the Internet for work on trains or subways, because their jobs usually have high demand for the Internet. If the government spend money to improve Internet access in the train tunnels, people can use their computer to work on those transportations. For example, as a computer science student, I often need to access the remote server in my lab on trains to run experiments and that requires stable Internet. The government of my country, Taiwan, it spends a lot of money to improve the Internet access inside the tunnel. As a result, I can do my job with no worry on trains with the stable Internet access.
Finally, I think that public transportation is not the highest priority among the social issues. To be more specific, I believe that poor public transportation will not effect the society immediately, and people can endure the poor public transportation for a while. For example, some buses in Taiwan are old and smell bad, and some bus drivers are rude to the passengers, but it can still take the passengers to the destination, which is the main goal for public transportation. Thus, I believe that public transportation will not be the issue which governments need to spend money on when there is another issue existing.
For the reasons mentioned above, I agree that it is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, still, thus, while, for example, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85227272727 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87270839321 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440340909091 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8434869335 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.866666667 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446226757213 0.236089414692 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180662828712 0.076458572812 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164963382686 0.0737576698707 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.347707776122 0.150856017488 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181422901439 0.0645574589148 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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