Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is said that knowledge is power. The intriguing fact about this sentence is that it does not restrict knowledge to a few areas but it means knowledge in general. This is why I believe that it is of utmost important to have at least a basic information about what goes on around the world, even if they seem irrelevant to our daily lives now. Thus, I agree with the statement and my reasons for saying so will be elaborated in the coming paragraphs.
Firstly, it should be noted that our knowledge is always limited by what we know at the moment. What seems irrelevant now might be highly important and sought after in near future to the point of directly affecting our decisions. Hence, I believe we should not label information "useless" or "irrelevant" just because we have no need for them at present. There are many instances of events that I initially paid little attention, only to become urgently important in a later date. For example, I never paid attention to financial news as I was never active on stock market. It never occurred to me that one day I would have to work with financial data and carefully analyze them as part of my internship during my bachelor's studies. The company assigned me to cost management office and I had to cram different sorts of acronyms and information’s in a very short time to be able to understand what was going on in that office. This example clearly shows that no matter how irrelevant some information seem now, they might come in handy in future and it is better to know them now than later.
Secondly, knowing more about the society and environment that we are living in helps us feel more fulfilled. It is a basic desire of the mankind to know more about everything and our brains are wired to seek information in any situation. No matter how insignificant events are, knowing what they are and why they are happening will fulfill this desire for knowledge and make us feel in control over our actions, instead of being dictated by random events and people. I remember during quarantine due to COVID-19 infection, I felt anxious and overly stressed because I had no idea what was happening and why this virus suddenly took the world in storm. Reading about previous pandemics, which I always neglected and thought were irrelevant to where I live, helped me find solace in knowing that COVID-19 was nothing worse than the likes of Ebola and if the mankind was able to overcome those pandemics, it should not have much problems dealing with the new virus. Therefore, knowledge about world events make us feel empowered and ready to counter any situation.
In summary, I believe it is always good to know as much as we can about our environment. Humans are social beings and need social interactions. Such interactions will be much easier if they have paid attention to mundane events because they would feel empowered and ready in any circumstances. We might even find ourselves in dire need of these simple information one day, so having knowledge beforehand would prove beneficial if the day comes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 921, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ome those pandemics, it should not have much problems dealing with the new virus. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, at least, for example, in general, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2545.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 534.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.765917603 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79876353648 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485018726592 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 816.3 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0535695901 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.681818182 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16298300541 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485437433037 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436935136487 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11052197122 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461422678827 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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