Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Some people believe it is essential to follow the news all around the world and know what is happening in other countries. I think it is more beneficial for people not to know about many events worldwide. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in this essay.
Firstly, many events happen daily in the world, and most are not good news. Many wars and crimes are happening worldwide, and knowing about them makes people stressed and anxious. Thus, after a while, many people will suffer from anxiety and depression. Therefore, People should know less about events in other countries to prevent mental and spiritual problems. My own experience is an appealing example of this. I used to watch the news on television and follow it on social media every day. At that time, I was bombarded with a lot of information about cruel people and governments. After some months, I felt depressed and could barely sleep without nightmares. When I went to the doctor to treat myself, he told me to be far away from sad news. Fortunately, after diminishing hearing the news, I could feel happier and slept well.
Furthermore, when people want to know about events worldwide as much as possible, they have to spend a lot of time gathering information and news. Therefore, they do not have enough time to do their daily tasks, and even they cannot concentrate on their studies or jobs. In that case, people waste their time and do not do their responsibilities. For example, when I was spending my time listening to the news, I did not have enough time to study, so I failed one of my exams at university at that time. If I had spent less time following the news, I would have been able to study and pass my exam.
In conclusion, although some people think it is important to know what has occurred in different countries, I believe there is no need to know about events in other countries. Not only do people feel stressed out, but they can also spend time on their duties.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63068181818 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55456971842 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525568181818 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2544396846 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216892630395 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694915063544 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579058971392 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143229030741 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207174953917 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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