Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this era of technology and science, being knowledgeable and cautious about the controversial issues of the contemporary world is an unavoidable part of every individual's life. Actually, a vast number of people believe that it is not crucial to get involved in every single event, especially when it has not a direct impact on one's life. However, I hold the view that to be a valuable part of society, even if an event has no influence on an individual's life, one has to engage the situation and get enough information about the surrounding areas. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
First of all, there is no way to predict the happenings of the near future and we cannot ensure that a specific obstacle that has been widespread once in a specific part of the world, will not affect our lives in the future. To be more specific, what happens in this world, especially natural disasters are out of humans' control and people are not capable of preventing catastrophes that may occur during their lifetime. Therefore, gathering information about what is happening in this world of mysteries and randomness, can help people overcome the obstacles and get prepared for the potential hardships that may once take place. For instance, Coronavirus was first found in China and people had a really hard time tackling the virus and taking care of the patients. However, this virus didn't remain just in that part of the world and soon it appeared to spread all over the globe and affected numerous people all around the world. By the way, from the researches that have been done in China, people knew that by getting isolated and keeping a specific distance with other human beings, they can prevent getting sick. So, it is true that at first it just influenced a group of people, but if people were not aware of the ways that can help them protect themselves from it, it would also affect more people and resulted in an awkward situation.
Another reason that deserves some words here is that human beings are dependent on their relationships and seeing one member of their family or friends tackling an awkward situation saddens them. For this reason, people have to know about different events to help their family members and friends in case of being a part of that event. To illustrate, I go back to my previous example of Coronavirus. Actually, my sister lives in China and when this virus spread out, I was really anxious and worried about it. So, knowing more about the virus itself, ways to protect oneself from being affected and the medical cures helped me to relieve my own stress and also help my sister to better overcome the problem. Hence, since we all have people who are important to us and may live far from us, we have to know what is going on in the world to communicate with each other and hand out the problems to relieve the levels of pain and stress.
To sum it up, getting involved in happenings that are less likely to affect our own lives can help us prevent from being affected by the same situation in the future and also, let us know how to defeat the problem in the time of occurrence, either for ourselves or our friends living in other parts of the globe.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...y world is an unavoidable part of every individuals life. Actually, a vast number of people...
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Line 1, column 445, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...even if an event has no influence on an individuals life, one has to engage the situation a...
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Line 2, column 788, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...re of the patients. However, this virus didnt remain just in that part of the world a...
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Line 2, column 1289, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...otect themselves from it, it would also affect more people and resulted in an awkward situa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, as to, for instance, by the way, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 52.1666666667 173% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2654.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 568.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67253521127 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52002493824 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475352112676 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 836.1 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0937938931 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.444444444 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.6045352989 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156980860558 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537800001815 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310007855074 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947716146718 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022464424679 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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