Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Nowadays, no one can cast doubt on the events occurring at the international level has a paramount significance in the World's people, and this news is becoming trendy among people. My emphatic belief that we should be informed from worldwide news and events if it is unlikely will affect our daily lives.
If I were asked to determine a couple of reasons standing behind my point of view, I would emphatically suggest that these events may reoccur in our daily life in the future, and the World systematic organizations are well-related together, thereby these chains can affect our life situation in the same time. I will manifest my reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
Without an adumbration of doubt, both experienced and know the international related events help us predict future evidence earlier; however, we must be a keen and precautious observer in solving perplexing Worldwide problem. My personal experience is compelling evidence for what I mean. In Iran, people have faced earthquake disasters many times during the last decade; they saw the turkey earthquake experiences; therefore, they have been ready for any happenings in the future, they provided emergency staff such as aids, drugs, hospital, and so on, they helped each other to compensate and alleviate the destructions grieves.
It also goes without declaring the World likes a system; if a part of the system does not work correctly, other parts will have a problem in doing so; maybe a disease that breaks through in one country, other countries have not responsible for, but it is fair that helping each other. To be more specific, the Coronavirus started to expand in China, all of the Chinese people have in trouble in prevented this disaster, but up-to-date news from china help other scientists in other countries to solve and to vaccinate people earlier.
It can be summed up in accentuating that acquainting with news and events in other parts of the World is necessities, and it needs more care from politicians and people. These happenings are more likely to reoccur in our daily lives in the future, and the World systematic organizations are well-related together; thereby, these chains can impact our life situation simultaneously. The World not only is as a whole system but also have souls like a human body.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...redict future evidence earlier; however, we must be a keen and precautious observ...
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...Coronavirus started to expand in China, all of the Chinese people have in trouble in preve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08947368421 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87234883182 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5603031662 48.9658058833 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.166666667 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144184104127 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556089598857 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369544467014 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855592720975 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343010021259 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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