Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I believe that being cognitive about events going on in the world can hardly bring any negative effects because when you do so, you understand the world you live in better. 21 century is an era where physical barrier such as space is not a factor that blocks the connection among countries anymore. Therefore, I will argue that events happening around the world that seems very far from people’s daily life may be very relevant to individuals.
First, simply being aware of the significant international events or issues can make people do better decision that has a positive contribution to society. Take the plastic recycling industry as an example. The plastic recycling industry was working just fine not a few years ago, however, an agreement signed by China, the place where the largest plastic recycling industry is located, has banned recycling companies in China from importing plastic waste from other countries. As a result, it causes the whole recycling system to break down. If people are aware of this issue, I believe that they will likely reduce the use of plastic, which if everyone does so, can really release the burden on the plastic recycling industry.
In addition, understanding global events not only benefits society, but it also benefits individuals because it allows people to learn lessons from other’s failures or successes. For example, Taiwan is one of the few countries that have successfully keep the coronavirus pandemic under control. When people learn how Taiwan executes the prevention measures, even if they are from the other side of the world, they can still benefit from Taiwan’s success.
Finally, helping others, I believe, is one of the duties as a global citizen, and knowing events happening around the world is a great opportunity that allows people to do so. Although contributing to society might seem to be too unpractical at first, there are many ways to accomplish it, such as donating to organizations that are working on certain global issues.
All in all, I believe that in the current time, there are no such huge events that are completely irrelevant to people’s daily life. Therefore, when we realize that everyone is connected in this world, there’s no way that we can be careless about things happening around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, really, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08465608466 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67362434268 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9023465951 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.133333333 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171495116493 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568524719674 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580301717859 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101681779497 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529521225428 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.