A glance at people's attitude toward job hours brings to the light a question that has been asked several times, namely, whether working three days a week for long hours is better or five days a week for shorter hours. As a pharmacist and new mother, I prefer to work five days a week and then spend time with my family the rest of the day. Although most singles who live alone prefer to work for longer hours and then enjoy their long weekends with close friends, this plan is almost impossible for me.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that my daughter cannot stay without me more than eight hours. Both of us have a strong connection since she is dependant on me. It is obvious that she needs my attention so, when I arrive home, she gets really happy. I know that if I work the whole day and do not hug her, she becomes depressed and sick. In the routine life, married people have more responsibilities that should take them into account, which make them unable to work longer than usual. Therefore, I need to go back home around evening.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that efficiency is a crucial factor in healthcare. As a matter of fact, even a small mistake can endanger patients' life. This significant factor proves that if I work more than specific hours, I cannot concentrate on prescriptions well enough. I have seen that after six pm. pharmacy technicians make a lot more mistake than morning and I am the one who has to correct all the mistakes. medicine look similar and somtimes patients take the seriously dangerous medicine without understanding. So, I prefer to be safe and do not put people in trouble.
Nevertheless, it is great to work only three days a week and then go to travel and enjoy your life. Some of my colleagues chose longer schedules and all of them are singles. Even if I had a long holiday I could not go to trip since I have a lot of postponed tasks and need to manage them first. On the other hand, travel with a baby is not enjoyable. She needs more care and attentions during journey and then I have no time to relax. Thus, it is better to work five days a week and stay at home after work.
Due to aforementioned argument discussed in the previous statements, I highly recommend married people especially if they work in healthcare area, to work all the week but for shorter hours and then be with their precious family and take care of them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...s have a strong connection since she is dependant on me. It is obvious that she needs my ...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Medicine
...ne who has to correct all the mistakes. medicine look similar and somtimes patients take...
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Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'looks'.
Suggestion: looks
...s to correct all the mistakes. medicine look similar and somtimes patients take the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, nevertheless, really, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44543429844 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48106304454 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512249443207 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0996284006 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7826086957 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5217391304 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30434782609 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349707652082 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854185739369 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919984174108 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192302331636 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110041102737 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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