Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to read or watch the news presented by people whose views are similar to your own than by people whose views are different from yours.
The 20th and 21st centuries are characterized by all momentous changes they have made in human's life. It is an axiomatic fact that one of the most outstanding mileposts in these two centuries is the concept of differentiation. Although some people hold this stand point that it is important to read and watch the news presented by people whose views are similar to your own, but some others have another vantage point and believe that other facets are more vital such as, news from those have different views. I, personally, contend that the most rational alternative could be latter group due to quite a few of reasons which are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, the primary reason striking my mind is the fact that in this modern life, the lack of mutual understanding suffers human beings. With this in mind, listening to and understanding of the toward side of a subject, have a significant role to solve problem which are existed among the human beings' societies. For instance, reading the newspaper from the views that are not similar to min d, assist me to find out about their concerns and interests in order to reduces conflicts among us.
The second reason which should be taken into account is the fact that, any events, subject, and phenomenal have quite a few of facets. In the ground that, some of vital aspects could be hidden from a specific point of view. People have to be known have to do with other uncover aspects of topic to decide properly when confronting it. For example, the political atmosphere are full of these misunderstandings. Such an excellent politician must be hear of various sources of news, to react about what happened in society in wise manner.
The last reason worth to indicate is the deniable fact that in this hectic life, the censorship in mass media and news agencies are widespread. In this regard, always, there are facets which conveyed improperly to the people who read or watch the sources which have similar views. Hence, as far as truth is concerned, people must look after opposite point of views to reduce the effects of censorship activities .
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons, in that, mutual understanding, hidden aspects, and censorship, led us to conclude that we need to read and watch news which are presented by people from different point of view. Nevertheless, that was a story in nutshell, as matter of fact, there are a great number of reasons supporting the issue which are not mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87058823529 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6852572244 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531764705882 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9061221536 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.764705882 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251713623424 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686081397034 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930204407624 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141815833854 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573063602664 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.