Science is the logical, evidence-based pursuit and application of knowledge and understanding of the natural and social worlds. In contrast, art is the expression or use of human creativity and imagination. Neither of these applications is essential to our lives, meaning there is no shortage of opinions on whether it is better to focus on science or the arts in university. However, if students had to choose a side, I think that science is the best option. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
Science depends on mathematics and physical evidence. According to historical records, science played a significant role in developing our knowledge on Earth, allowing us to be where we are today. For instance, medicine was not always western pill style in the past. In ancient times, humans specializing in biology had to go through trial and error to research and conclude the medical substances of particular plants and animals we utilize in our medical field. My sister's experience is a compelling illustration of this. Currently, my sister works in IT, where she focuses on helping people with disabilities to live a more comfortable life. Recently, with her hard effort and dedicated time, her group could create glasses for deaf people to read the captions of the speaker. Through her invention, deaf people can enjoy their daily life with fewer struggles and difficulties.
On top of that, science and math are more valuable than art and literature because knowledge of math and science is necessary for understanding and advancing technology. Because of technology, this world is now more connected than ever due to the internet, mobile phones, and airplanes. What I'm trying to say is best illustrated in a news report I heard about asphalt blended with waste plastic in India, primarily to pave new roads. Through their discovery and creativity, communities were able to develop their areas efficiently. Eventually, many other countries like my own used this technique, addressing the problem of ocean pollution. Innovations like these might not be achievable if students do not continue to study math and science. Hence, students should study science and math to continue making technological progress.
Finally, yet importantly, math and science are more crucial disciplines because they are necessary for lifesaving and public safety. My older brother recently attended college to become a surgeon, drawing on my experience. Almost all the classes he will take throughout his eight years of study will be of this nature. He is currently taking science and math subjects like anatomy, algebra, biology, and geometry. She could treat people's ailments and wounds after he graduates because he studies these fields. It is more important for pupils to learn math and science than art and literature for the sake of the general welfare.
To sum up, I affirm that science is more worth taking than art. It is because it provides students with the knowledge to develop our world, advance technology, and can cure the sick and dying people in our world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, however, if, so, for instance, i feel, i think, in contrast, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 13.8261648746 217% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2614.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 506.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16600790514 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86551723979 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 815.4 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5973928474 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3571428571 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285516281541 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702856269814 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740543758503 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155181692736 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623653470601 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 86.8835125448 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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