Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. It is more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team than to work independently.
No one can deny the fact that everybody wants to be independent and shine in their own way. In the given scenario, it is perceived that whether it is imperative to perform task in a group or individually. Which one will be effective? Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubtedly it will be efficient to work as a group yet it is more effective to perform solely. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs. To commence with, although we come up varieties of idea and concept while working in group, we urge to find solution by ourself by doing research and collect data as much as we can if we are alone. To be more precise, if there is no body to assist you then you are compelled to do your own thing by your own. This enhanced your ability to do more than you think you are capable of. I myself is a compelling evidence of it during my school days we used to assignment in group. We do not have to confer our effort 100% since there was a presence of group leader who manages all the things. Later, when I was in high school we had to perform our task by our own. This time I came to realize that I am able of doing task far better than I thought. Indeed, this made me a self sufficient person and aid to ameliorates my performance. Secondly, when you are in a group and project turned out be the worst then everybody is liable of the out however if it goes well then merely the group leader is appreciated and recognized. There might be the possibility for real member who contributed the most is shaded. Yet, this would not be the case while working independently. Infact, there is a high chance to shine and get recognized by your hard work and effort. Drawing from my own experience, when I did my project without the assistance of anyone, my work was appreciated and even I was honoured by my professor. Needless to say, doing job on your own teach you a valuable skill of managing things by yourself and this is applicable in numerous situation in our life. The above mentioned statement sounds reasonable that working in a group aid you to accomplish your task in a conducive way which should not be overlooked. However, there is always a probability of not reaching into the conclusion as different people have distinct perception regarding a particular subject matter. Therefore, we ourself is sufficient to plan, execute and reach goal as well. All things considered, there is no second thought on how crucial is it to be able to handle your things on your own. We learn to grow and move forward accordingly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 554, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'finding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'urge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: finding
...concept while working in group, we urge to find solution by ourself by doing research a...
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Line 1, column 684, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
... alone. To be more precise, if there is no body to assist you then you are compelled to...
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Line 1, column 2118, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a conducive way" with adverb for "conducive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...a group aid you to accomplish your task in a conducive way which should not be overlooked. However...
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Line 1, column 2350, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...r subject matter. Therefore, we ourself is sufficient to plan, execute and reach g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45222929936 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68386511824 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498938428875 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4205139054 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.375 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257717913883 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660418767099 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550490667544 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257717913883 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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