It is not uncommonly accepted that making friends with wise people will make our life easier since we can acquire useful knowledge from them and we can count on their intelligence to solve the problems that we cannot fix if we need help. On the other hand, we also like to friend people who have a sense of humor because it will color our normal life with sweet memories and a positive attitude. Therefore, from my perspective, there is no hierarchy between intelligent people and humorous people. Making friends with intelligent people is of equal importance to making friends with humorous people.
To begin with, we can learn a lot from intelligent people, which is beneficial for our own development professionally and personally. Intelligent people, for instance, usually come up with novel ideas to solve intricate and intertwined problems such as interpersonal dilemmas or technical cruxes in our jobs. With their assistance and intelligence, the burden of the rest of the colleagues could largely been lowered. So, it is quite a precious opportunity to make friends with these people and we can have a chance to learn their methodology and ways of thinking, which will significantly improve our job performance. Moreover, in our personal life, we can still learn a lot from these wise friends. Their intelligence equips them with more insightful thinking and unique perspectives, as well as subtle observation. That is to say, they can provide more reliable and trustable suggestions for us in our life such as whether is it a good way to express my feelings to my girlfriend or should I invest my money in this stock. Thus, you can never go wrong to make friends with intelligent people since they are your lifelong treasure.
Besides the benefits of making friends with wise people, people with a good sense of humor also play a significant role in our life experiences. These humorous friends teach us how to see things in a positive way and ease our pain and anxiety when we are confronted with problems or dilemmas. For example, my friend Lisa is a humorous person to me. And she always uses her jokes and humor to let me laugh out loud even when I have a bad mood. I remember the time when I was extremely nervous about having a solo cello performance in front of all my schoolmates. I was so anxious and couldn’t speak a word. Lisa came to me and told me if she were me, she would imagine the audience becoming potatoes and tomatoes while playing the cello instead of real people. Thanks to her funny yet relaxing metaphor, I felt much better. It allowed me to be more focused on my performance rather than thinking the embarrassing things. Thus, having friends with humorous people will make you feel relaxed and peaceful, as well as give you the strength to move on.
To sum up, intelligent people and humorous people both pave the way for us in becoming better people. The former improves our competence in society, while the latter improves our inner status. Thus, comparing which is better between these two groups of people is meaningless.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rous friends teach us how to see things in a positive way and ease our pain and anxiety when we a...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e two groups of people is meaningless.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2549.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83681214421 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7419912931 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.500948766603 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 796.5 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6072955663 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.96 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.08 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405219103157 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129536562408 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125598780843 0.0737576698707 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266757749284 0.150856017488 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821436668834 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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