Many people said that it is more important to experience firsthand than to learn from books. This is because if you experience it in person, it is very different from seeing it only in books. I agree with this statement. I have three reasons to support my opinion.
First of all, if we gain knowledge from personal experience, it is hard to forget. If we learn from books, one day we forget. Therefore, when students study for exams, they watch, memorize and watch, memorize. However, things that we experienced in person are not easily forgotten because they remain in our minds even if we do not try to memorize them. For example, I remember when I went on a trip ten years ago, but I forgot the contents of society two years ago.
Second, you can learn practical life lessons. Of course, you can learn from books, but it is hard to feel directly. On the other hand, if you feel it through the journey, you can feel it better and have a more diverse experience. The embodiment of this experience and wisdom of life is so valuable that it cannot be converted into money. For instance, I always believe in my experience and set my life motto based on it.
Last, if you learn in person, you can experience various things. One of the reasons why people say to travel a lot when you go to college is that you can learn all your life through traveling. Through these fun, difficult and embarrassing experiences, you can solve various problems in life without hiding. For example, I have been ignored by people from other countries before, but later in Chinam, I witnessed and talked about trying to sell goods expensive only to Koreans.
This is all about why we should learn some knowledge from personal experience. Both have advantages and disadvantages, but if you experience it yourself rather than learning from books, it will definitely work.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, of course, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67791411043 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58264174647 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515337423313 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9144469538 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278907560065 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091967014181 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067433463853 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163403443389 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600508979512 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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