Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The knowledge we gain from personal experiences is more valuable than the knowledge we gain from books. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do not use memorized examples.
Knowledge is very essential in any filed of life. Knowledgeable person can survive anywhere in the world. Knowledge can be gained either from books or by our own experiences. I think the knowledge gained by own experiences is more important than that from the book. I liked this way due to several reasons which I have explored in the following essay.
First of all, our own experiences makes us learn more rather than just a bookish knowledge. My experience has been a compelling example of it. I have done bachelors in automobile engineering from Gujarat University. I love to learn new things about how to repair the cars and other automobile vehicles. I had got much experience through repairing the cars from garage at my home. Once my car was not starting in snow just few months back. I was heading towards work and I had tried everything to start the car but I had no clue why it was not starting. At that point, my knowledge about my own experience worked which I got from repairing the stuff from my garage. In this way, sometimes personal experience help us in day to day life activities.
Furthermore, personal experience will be more beneficial in really world situations. On the contrary, book just gives us information but will not say in which situation we can use it. I had a close friend whom I was studying in the dental university in India. He was very intelligent in studies during the university and has always been topper in the class. After graduation, when he started working in real situation treating the patients he was struggling treating them. It was really hard for him in spite of having good grades in the class. On the other hand, I was very average in studies but I like to do root canals and other dental procedures a lot. So when I started working in the clinic I had no problem in treating the patients. This example clearly shows that personal experiences would matter more in life than just getting good grades.
Lastly, personal knowledge teaches us something new through good or bad experiences. Information from the book any person can taught us but in our own experience we can learn something new. For example, I have read in the book that it has been hard to do scuba diving for those who had no experience on swimming. But when I did scuba diving in Spain with my friends, I came to know the experience when tried it. In this manner, own experiences may be beneficial to learn new stuff.
In conclusion, I agree that personal experiences overweighs the bookish knowledge as it help us to learn more and something new. On top of it, it may be able to face real world situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'bookish knowledge'.
Suggestion: bookish knowledge
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...the cars and other automobile vehicles. I had got much experience through repairi...
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...airing the cars from garage at my home. Once my car was not starting in snow just fe...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to treat'.
Suggestion: to treat
...treating the patients he was struggling treating them. It was really hard for him in spi...
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Message: “So when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nals and other dental procedures a lot. So when I started working in the clinic I had n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, may, really, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66239316239 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71293145471 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457264957265 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.3484321568 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.7333333333 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231398637495 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627907416802 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062717969461 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14176407667 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631502478324 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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