Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.
Since the dawn of civilization, transportation has played an amazing role in our society and the debate on whether or not modern transport has proven its worth is controversial. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of elements should be taken into consideration in order to examine the constructive and destructive facets of this issue. Due to its paramount importance, huge steps have been taken to elevate its role. Some people may hold the view that today's vehicles and shipping facilities are a boon to modern society. However, some other take an opposite side and believe that this is not true. From my vantage point, I concur with the former group and think that today is a better place to live because of modern transports.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is the convenience in moving from one place to another.Transports like airplanes, cars, bikes have made it possible to travel long distance in relatively shorter time and less effort. A vivid example which can be given to shed light on the subject is one of my own experience. I grew up in a small, remote village where urbanization took place rather slow. So, everyday I had to walk for an entire hour to reach my school and repeat the same arduous journey in the way back. However, now the situation is better. We have buses and taxis which give all the year transportation and if I had to make the same journey now, then it will probably take me less than 20 minutes and waste much less of my energy. In turn, they also save a lot of time.
Secondly, another reason which deserves some words to say is that they are also a great time saver. To be more specific, larger distances can now be traveled in much less time. Unlike our ancestors, who had to allocate entire days to move from one place to another, we can now travel the same distance in few hours. Let us consider flying between India and USA. Nowadays, modern airplane facilities allow us to make this journey in less than 12 hours and this is excluding the use of more sophisticated vehicles like jets. On the other hand, if our predecessors had to do the same task, then it would not be an exaggeration to say that they would be allotting more than 3-4 months for a task that now takes less than a day. Additionally, any amount of saved time holds a much precious value in the hectic, busy life schedule of twenty-first century.
Lastly, although the aforementioned reasons are the fierce one which cross the mind at first glance, they are by no means the only reasons available. In fact, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. Transport facilities have freed us from the demarcations of land and water boundaries. A person can move easily from one place to another and conduct his business in any place of the world. Moreover, we have the opportunity of advertising our products in any place we want. By way of example, a person specializing in organic honey production has the option of shipping his products to foreign nations. Per contra, a customer does not have to be limited within his local shops for buying products, modern shipping facilities allow him to place an order in any product being sold at any corner of the world.
To wrap it up, contemplating all fore said reasons, one can soon realize how modern transport and shipping developments have made our life convenient and easier.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Suggestion: Transports
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2787.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 594.0 407.700716846 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69191919192 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93681225224 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67890614027 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 212.727598566 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521885521886 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 891.9 618.680645161 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8382162816 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5357142857 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.67857142857 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234430970516 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538009735675 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651730314932 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136842445787 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630379017144 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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