Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.
Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
Transportation is one of the important scientific discovery of the world as it make our life the way we desired. In my personal view, we were blessed with the modern transportation because of the following reasons;
First, with the help of modern transportation's luxury and speed ensures people to enjoy a different place in a very short time. In this busy schedule, people are barely enjoy their life because of their work and only have a relatively short time to rejuvenate themself from their hectic life style. By swift and confortable travel, they can visit their favorite place to see a different location, experience its enthralling atomosphere and amazed with activities of new place. However, if this word sort of this characteristics in the means, people will stuck in their own land and have to taste the vapid life style full of work and tedious activities.
Secondly, because of the timely travel in emergency condition, people will not have to lose their life in the trivial matter. The modern service like fast track train, a airways and the ambulane can take a victim from the emergence location safely to the hospital. During the time of natural disaster, many injured people had saved by taking them to the hospital in a short time with the help of helicopter and vehicles. If people are diagnosised with the disease where they are no facility can be saved by taking them to foreign country by airplane within a few hours. Actually, a good transportation connects human kind nowadays a well that they can visit any place in their need.
Finally, by the help of the tranport systme, we do not have to face the stuff crisis use in our daily life. Truck, plane, jeep, ship, etc are used to import and export the many essential things that may not available in the certain location. As a whole, this system balance a world damand and supply pressure. If there were no such machine in this earth, human had to suffer from the massive crisis of the food, medical device and other necessary things.
To sum up, due to the above aforementioned view, I feel modern transportation makes our life easy, safe and prosperous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'stick'
Suggestion: stick
...aracteristics in the means, people will stuck in their own land and have to taste the...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e modern service like fast track train, a airways and the ambulane can take a vic...
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Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...th the help of helicopter and vehicles. If people are diagnosised with the disease...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ical device and other necessary things. To sum up, due to the above aforemention...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, sort of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82880434783 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66681050115 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551630434783 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4379486618 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.466666667 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129139461847 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450003414152 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442701387972 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079017335915 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314715620557 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.