Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.
Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
No one can deny that era both positive and negative aspects of modern transportation. If I was forced to choose, I would definitely agree that is much more positive things rather than negative ones for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, nowadays, everyone can take a public bus and go wherever they want, and this make the things easier. For example, when I was a teenager, my parents work all day long, and when I want to go to the mall, I never could go, but, when I discovered that one bus goes there once a day, I start to go every week. For this reason, I strongly think that modern transportation has made the world a better place to live.
Secondly, 2/3 of all product are transported by the ships, can be the product that is produced on china or even the car that if produced on USA, the modern ways of transportation are so diversified that the produtor of the product can choose what is better for him. I have to admit that my opinion is based on my own experience, when I want to sell my old smartphone, I posted in social medias, I find a consumer, and when I want to send to her, I realize how many different ways, and cheap ones, exists nowadays.
Finally, modern ways of transportation, are improving a lot the effect that them cause in the environment, the producers of cars, ships, air planes, are investing a lot in new technologies that decreased pollution, and make the world a better place to live.
In mention of all above-mentioned reasons and examples, I strongly agree that modern transportation and shipping, has made and are madding the world a better place to live
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or even the car that if produced on USA, the modern ways of transportation are so...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...en I want to send to her, I realize how many different ways, and cheap ones, exists nowadays. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, as for, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51827242525 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81026992015 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531561461794 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.9480324073 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.111111111 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4444444444 20.6045352989 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1888734264 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098049596628 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119227507169 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120388068796 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869508873226 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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