Should university education be free? Provide reasons and examples for your answer.
Education one of the most important units in any country, it reflect the development of the society and rise the country value, Many countries trying to reach the top between their neighbors countries they are seeking to improve their education programs and increase number of educated individual. Although some countries are using their education programs to increase their income by attraction other students from outside but in my opinion, I agree with the idea that university education should be available for everyone, even for free; I feel this way for several reasons which I will explain it in the following assay.
First of all, education is right for everyone, many of the people don’t have enough money to complete their studying and they ceases their studying because they don’t have the money or because they have to save the money for their families. My own personal experience provides a a compelling evidence of this. I was just finished my 12th class with heigh grade and decided attempting faculty of medicine to achieve my biggest dream of being a doctor. I can remember my family happiness at that time and also I can remember their faces when we calculate the cost of studying medicine per year, it was about 6000$, It was very hard for my family to provide this amount of money every year especially because I had been another family member studying in the university at that time. My father asked me to change the specialty and to study something less cost, I cried very much and changed the speciality but my dreams destroyed only because the financial situation of my family. This is one of the most important cause to encourage university education for free.
Second, all the companies employee only bachelors degree carrier individuals, of course that they are right about the bachelors degree better than diploma degree but not all the people can attend the university as I mentioned before, so to provide the work sector with well educated hand worker that couldn’t attend the university due to their financial situation the university education should be for free, for instance, after my graduation from university faculty of mechanical engineering I sent my paper to MBW company, after one week I met one of my friend at school who was graduates from engineering collage with diploma degree and he told me that he sent his paper last month to BMW company, I told him that I sent my paper last week and they replied directly and determined time for interview, he was annoyed and told me that he sent his CV for many companies but no one replied because he has diploma they replied they don’t accept diploma degree. So, because of the bachelors degree became mandatory in the last decade to start working, university education should be available for everyone.
In conclusion, university education became important for society and individual in the last decades, it improves the development of the countries and provides good career for everyone, so in order to provide the university education for everyone, the countries should provide it for free and save the poor people right of university education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, of course, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2650.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0284629981 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65786088383 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451612903226 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 854.1 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.1344086022 233% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 236.045240096 48.9658058833 482% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 240.909090909 100.406767564 240% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.9090909091 20.6045352989 233% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299558257566 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141479417286 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114809187331 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228822181451 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892706788248 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 11.7677419355 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 58.1214874552 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.1575268817 213% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.0537634409 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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