Do you agree or disagree with the folowing statement?
Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Enjoyment of life depends on our age as we can not do all the things we want at any age. I believe young people enjoy life more than older people do. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, at a young age, we have more family members and friends around us than our old age. For this reason, we can interact with the people around us. We never feel lonely or boring anytime as there is always someone to share our opinions or thoughts. Friends and family members help us a lot to enjoy life at a young age. From my personal experience, I am at a young age now. I have lots of friends and all the family members are beside me now. So whenever I feel bored or lonely, they give me the mental support and I do not feel lonely any more. I can discuss anything with them. Two years ago I failed in an examination because of my illness. My friends and family members gave me immense mental support then and I could overcome my depression. That is why I did well in my retake examination.
Secondly, at a young age, we can do anything we want to enjoy our life. We can make a tour with friends anytime, gossip with our friends, enjoy university days with friends and so on. Most of these we can not do at our old age as the surrounding of us will be changed then. We will have very few friends and family members then. For this reason, most of the time we will feel lonely. For instance, last year I alone with some of my friends made a plan to travel Cox's Bazar, the largest sea beach in the world. We made a plan for five days and we enjoyed ourselves a lot. We traveled all the surrounding areas of Cox's Bazar, ate all the famous food items, took a bath in the sea, played water bikes and so on.
In conclusion, I think that enjoying life is much easier for young people than the older one. This is because young people always have many friends and family members around them and they can do anything whatever they want.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
.... For this reason, we can interact with the people around us. We never feel lonely or boring anytime...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20734908136 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18395100305 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451443569554 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1736954098 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.7916666667 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29166666667 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237591853202 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882269826883 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138427535625 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222782608686 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110305358876 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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