It is important to keep old friends rather than make new friends. Explain your reasons and examples
Friendship is one of the most important relationships in the life. It the light of our darkness, and the source of our happiness. The debate on whether maintain our old friends or make new one still controversial one. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of elements should be taken in consideration before analyzing the constructive and destructive facets of this issue. Some argue that keeping the old friendship more important than making new one, while others disagree and hold a different opinion. From my vantage point, I concur with the former and aver that we should hold on our old friends. I feel this way for plethora of reasons and I would like to explain my reasoning in the subsequent paragraphs.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that our old friends are known everything about us. Since we are knowing each other from long period, they know the details of our life including our food, health, favorite colors and weakness points. For example, my close friend called Huda, we lived with each other about 7 years during studying in the university. Yesterday I got invitation for famous musician from my fiancé as a surprise for my birthday. I was at work and I have to be ready in an hour, I called her to buy dress for me while I had been prepared myself. Actually she bought very beautiful dress that similar to what I wanted. If I hadn't had her in my life, I would have lost my happiness. this life experience taught me why we should maintain our old friendships.
Another subtle point which deserve some word to say is that our old friend don't need any excuses for our absence, they know that we don't talking for a reason and when I will be free I will call her/him. For instance, I made a new friend last year and she called Maha, in the last week I had medical exam that kept me at home for a week without talking to anyone, my friend Huda knew that there was a reason and she just sent to that Wiam call me when you are free, while Maha sent to me multiple massages with very bad word because I disappeared without telling her. From this experience, I came to know the importance of maintaining our old friend because even if I had told Maha about the reason of my absence, she would have plain me for that also.
To wrap it up, our old friends are gift that should be saved for the rest of our life. This is because they know everything about us, understand us, tolerate us and accept us as we are. I totally agree with idea that we should maintain our old friend better than make new one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 94.0 43.0788530466 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2081.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46566523605 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44491336364 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491416309013 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1644004821 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0952380952 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1904761905 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19521832731 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678982398162 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742912466411 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140543530779 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794866964973 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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