Do you agree or disagree with the statements. Children should not be allowed to play the video games?
Generally speaking, I do not agree with the statement on proscribing children from playing video games. I feel this way for several reasons, some of which will be developed in subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, everybody needs a break from their everyday schedules and video games serve a very apt means of doing so. Certainly, there are still plenty of other sources of entertainment but for a school going child video games are the easily accessible ones. every one needs a break from their continuous hectic study routines. They need something to recharge and refresh their mind and here, video games serves the exact purpose. I can relate to this from my own personal experience. My school schedule was very cumbersome. we needed to attend non-stop classes from 7 in the morning to 6 in the evening. every day, after returning from school, my parents allowed me to play with my play station for a hour and this was really helpful in recharging my brain and training it for my next study schedule. It will not be an exaggeration to say that if I had attempted to study continuously without taking any breaks, then my exams would have been a complete disaster. In turn video games also help to make us mentally sharp.
hence, in addition to the accessible source of entertainment, video games also helps to keep our mind sharp. Many will argue that playing video games will make one lazy and fat so it is better to replace them with outdoor activities like badminton, football, etc. However, we cannot deny the fact that video games are an excellent sconce of mental exercises. many studies have proven that a person who has excellent gaming abilities also possess higher mind skills like quick thinking and superior awareness of environment. This is because video games require us to be quick on our mind and hands and have greater awareness of our surrounding. Such skills can directly be co-related with real-life situations in which a child who is better at playing video games also shows superior skills in classes.
Finally, it is not that playing video games destroys ones career. There are a lot of examples where an individual has gained wealth and fame just by demonstrating supreme skills in video games. I'll be the first to admit that excessive indulgence in games and complete ignorance of studies can be fatal to a students grade. Yet, despite this plenty of individuals who may not have been able to excel in schools are conquering the field of gaming and establishing a bright career for themself. For instance, nowadays people are obsessed with online gaming and they pay money to watch others play such games. Moreover, various gaming platforms have all worked in harmony to provide a suitable platform for career development as professional gamers. The money earned from such platforms in sum with the economical support from gaming fans has made it easy to establish a future for professional gaming.
to sum up, based on the argument explored above, I'm of the opinion that in most cases it's actually more beneficial for children to play video games. They can use such games as a break from their studies or develop careers in similar fields or gain superior mental skills just by playing these games. I think that every parent's should allocate a certain amount of time to allow their child to engage in this gaming world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, then, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, first of all, in most cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2795.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 573.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87783595113 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89258810929 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5625097477 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 298.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520069808028 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 869.4 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.937155017 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8214285714 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4642857143 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.39285714286 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298288806014 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840829318698 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665404872503 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186772724886 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358713180973 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 86.8835125448 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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