Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.
Some people attribute modern vehicles with pollution and lazy life style, hence do not agree that they are making our life easier, Others disagree. Generally speaking I'm of the opinion that modern transport and shipping facilities have made our world a much easier place to live. I feel this way for several reasons and will be positing some of my reasoning in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, they have made movement between places much convenient and easier as compared to the past. Certain some argue that even in their absence, people still used to move easily between places. But still we have to agree that Transports like airplanes, cars, bikes have made it possible to travel long distance in relatively shorter time and less effort. I can relate to this from my own personal experience. I grew up in a small, remote village where urbanization took place rather slow. So, everyday I had to walk for an entire hour to reach my school and repeat the same arduous journey in the way back. However, now the situation is much better. We have buses and taxis which provide all the year transportation and if I had to make the same journey now, then it will probably take me less than 20 minutes and waste much less of my energy. In turn, they also save a lot of time.
So, in addition to better movement, they are also a great time saver. To be more specific, larger distances can now be traveled in much less time. Unlike our ancestors, who had to allocate entire days to move from one place to another, we can now travel the same distance in few hours. Let us consider flying between India and USA. Nowadays, modern airplane facilities allow us to make this journey in less than 12 hours and this is excluding the use of more advanced vehicles like jets. On the other hand, if our predecessors had to do the same task, then it would not be an exaggeration to say that they would be allotting more than 3-4 months for a task that now takes less than a day. Additionally, any amount of saved time holds a much precious value in the hectic, busy life schedule of twenty first century.
Finally, they have enabled us to conduct business at global level. I'll be the first to admit that there are other means of globalizing our products. Despite this options, we have to admit that transport facilities have freed us from the demarcations of land and water boundaries. A person can move easily from one place to another and conduct his business in any place of the world. WE no further have to be restricted within a single place, but moreover have the opportunity of advertise our products in any place we want. By way of example, a person specializing in organic honey production has the option of shipping his products to foreign nations. Per contrast, a customer does not have to be limited within his local shops for buying products, modern shipping facilities allow him to place an order in any product being sold at any corner of the world.
By the way of conclusion, the above explored explanations and examples provide a clear illustration of how modern transport and shipping developments have made our life convenient and easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, i feel, in addition, by the way, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2612.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 557.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68940754039 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85807034144 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52432508893 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506283662478 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 836.1 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2895359958 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7407407407 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6296296296 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14814814815 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237608117327 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625866387201 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095842999924 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152076499289 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07082144297 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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