Some high schools require students to wear uniform, while others allow students to choose their own attire. Which one do you prefer and why?
The debate on whether or not educational institutes should make it compulsory for their students to wear a school uniform is a very controversial one. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of elements should be taken into consideration in order to examine the constructive and destructive facets of this issue. Some people argue that wearing a school dress provides a positive ambiance for learning. On the other hand, some others take an opposite side and disagree. From my vantage point, I concur with the former group and aver that high schools should require their students to wear an unifrom rather than allowing them dress independently.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that school dress creates unifromity among the attendents, which has a direct effect on students behavior. It'll not be an exaggeration to say that on the verge of dressing popularly among their mates, some students even reach to the point of discriminating and bullying others. The matter becomes much worse when the one being bullied belongs to a poor family. A vivid example which can be given to shed light on the subject is one of my own experience. During my school days, we had the liberty of chossing our own dress because of which there was always a mental pressure of being as good looking as our freinds. However, because of my meager family conditions, I could not afford to dress extravagantly which eventually resulted in being excluded from my friends group and in some cases even lead to humiliation. Even though, I was able withstand all of this, a shy, timid child may not be able to endure the same and may wise to leave the school. THis experience clearly proves the importance of school dress.
Secondly, another reason which deserves some words to say is potential savings on parent's money. Not every parents can afford to buy different sets of fashionable attires for their children. Since, a child will not be willing to wear the same cloth to school everyday, this inevitably creates a financial pressure on the parents, which can easily be avoided by buying a pair of school dress instead.
Lastly, although the aforementioned reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at first glance, they are by no means the only reason available. In fact, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. Allowing students to choose their own saltatories may result in inappropriate clothing. For instance, looking fashionable and on style is the prior desire of most of the children rather than dressing according to some moral values. And in the chase of being the most popular kid of the school, many may step out of line and choose attires which are not in any way appropriate for school. As a result, this may cause severe degradation of morals and ethics.
To wrap it up, contemplating all fore said reasons, one can soon realize the importance of school issue dressed over student's arbritary choices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in fact, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2447.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 499.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90380761523 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66629632785 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537074148297 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2453205796 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.391304348 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6956521739 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283877645495 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084365042532 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671207299326 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161620797939 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642832590506 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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