Some high schools require students to wear uniform, while others allow students to choose their own attire. Which one do you prefer and why?
School is the place where had many things such as knowledge, relationships, mathematic experts etc. However,, there are a lot of regulation as well. Some colleges set taking their uniform on as the unbreakable rule. In my opinion, I do not disagree that students should wear the uniform for some advantages.
Firstly, wearing a uniform could save money. That's because, in my country, the government has provided good quality student clothes free for everyone in every year, so there is no question why wearing uniform is better than wearing private clothes. They might use these revenue for taking some course to develop and to improve their skills they want.
What's more? Wearing a uniform could reduce some kinds of discrimination in school, such a huge inevitable problems. Nowadays, the fashionable clothes are moving and seeking as fast as the world moving. I guess I mean, fashion is change dramatically in everyday and there is no constraint about this area. Without uniform, some wealthy students would choose to wear any of fashionable clothes which is expensive, but, on the other hand, some would wear the normal clothes. This is create the difference between students and lead to discrimination to some students who cannot afford the expensive clothes.
Finally, I think the uniform cause students to feel more unity in their own college. In the same way, when you are in football match, you feel more fruitful. Students could even more concentrate in group activities, not only sports but also team project as well. This brings about more effective learning that useful for students with no doubts.
To summarize, with or without the uniform students could be provided to learn something new. Nevertheless, with wearing the same clothes could lead to higher stage of learning and save the money too. For all above, I could not agree more that students should wearing a uniform.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09935897436 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61913499015 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1799390243 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7368421053 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78947368421 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33358453295 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095874692475 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769456513935 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183526438332 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376405080895 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.