When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
We have heard a ton of story about the successful people around this world, and have always wondered how they become successful like that. Some people say that to be success you need luck. However, in my perspective, I think hardworking is play a crucial ingredient for success. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, perseverance and keep doing what you have to accomplish are the real decisive factors of success. The entire successful role models who I have ever known, they are all hardworking individual person. They have always kept working hard more than other people who are in their same area. For example, Michael Jordan, the greatest basketball player of all time in NBA history, was once kicked from his former high school basketball team. Instead of crying and locking himself to the room, he had practiced more and more, and finally, he was expert in something that once he was looked down, Basketball.
Another view of my opinion about working hard is it creates the opportunities to open the successful gate of our life. Some people might get a higher position in their jobs because of his hard working, or he might get the superb job which he wants because of his dignity. I do not disagree that it’s luck of him, but I could say that the hardworking is surely the base of their success.
Finally, for someone who wins the lottery and gets millions of dollar, or obtain the money without hardworking, I think this type of success which comes from pure luck is temporary and fast disappear like the quote “Easy come, easy go”. Therefore, if we want to trust in success stability, hardworking is reliable.
To summarize, hardworking is the key of success. I think that it’s not matter that who you are, or where you have been, just keep moving and looking forward like someone who you think is the most successful person. No one can stop you and chase the success out of you even he is a failure as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78917378917 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55976207488 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558404558405 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9449655666 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8823529412 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185790790924 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655468884735 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435833605816 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10530797697 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376453198423 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.