Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of giving emphasis to the truthful things in any relationship. If I were forced to choose between between telling the truth and not telling the reality, I would definitely choose to stay honest rather than to speak a lie. It is my firm belief that being honest in any relationship for a number of reasons, and i will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, staying humble in any realationship between people will help us to avoid arguments and the problems that we will face hiding the reality. In addition, we can ruin our valuable connection with important people and arouse conflicts between them. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced my by own personal experience. About few years ago, I mistakenly broke the big front door made of glass. I was so much terrified that my mother would come and scold me for breaking the door. I could have conceal that by making simple excuses that i was not in house either , but i decided to tell the truth and she excused me. Furthermore, she even embraced me for accepting the truth. As a result, I learned a great lesson of my life that being realistic person will be very beneficial. For this reason, i personally feel that telling true is the most crucial in life if we want to make good relationship with people.
Secondly, supporting to speak true will put our relationship to the high level we have ever expected. Drawing from my own experience, when I was little kid I saw one of my friend stealing purse in the cafeteria of our school. I quickly took the action by reporting it and also helped them to catch him when he ran away. Moreover, I was declared hero of my school after the incident and even got honored for my bravery. In this circumstances , its evident that telling truth is always rewarded. Consequently, it's pretty obvious to see why we should always speak the truth.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that being truthful is the most crucial to maintain good terms with people. This is because it prevents antagonism among people and we can also get accolade for being true. Thus, there are myriad reasons to be convinced by the fact that truth is the most important factor to save any relationship between people..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, in addition, as a result, to begin with, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67874396135 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60947326685 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8228115678 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.2380952381 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308933619453 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852964145352 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851998187692 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198656401815 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615703870578 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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